Colleen Chesebro’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Synonyms Only – Hollow and Ghost

 

Tanka Tuesday on Saturday

 

Tanka Tuesday

 

Welcome to this week’s Poetry Challenge from Colleen Chesebro – The Fairy Whisper. We choose our form of poetry and must include synonyms for the two words given to us by Colleen – Ghost and Hollow. Today I’ve written a tanka.

 

Today’s tanka poetry was inspired by my book Words We Carry.

 

Words We Carry

 

 

Words

Hurtful Words leave Scars

 

Hurtful words leave scars

Egos bruise so easily

An empty hole grows

A shell of our former self

When the spirit is broken

 

COLLEEN’S WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 106, “GHOST & HOLLOW,” #SYNONYMS ONLY

 

The Rules:

 

For Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge, you can write your poem in one of the forms defined below. Click on the links to learn about each form:

HAIKU IN ENGLISH 5/7/5 syllable structure. A Haiku is written about seasonal changes, nature, and change in general.

TANKA IN ENGLISH 5/7/5/7/7 syllable structure. Your Tanka will consist of five lines written in the first-person point of view. This is important because the poem should be written from the perspective of the poet.

HAIBUN IN ENGLISH Every Haibun must begin with a title. Haibun prose is composed of short, descriptive paragraphs, written in the first-person singular.

The text unfolds in the present moment, as though the experience is occurring now rather than yesterday or some time ago. In keeping with the simplicity of the accompanying haiku or tanka poem, all unnecessary words should be pared down or removed. Nothing must ever be overstated.

The poetry never tries to repeat, quote, or explain the prose. Instead, the poetry reflects some aspect of the prose by introducing a different step in the narrative through a microburst of detail. Thus, the poetry is a sort of juxtaposition – different yet somehow connected.

Cinquain ALSO: Check out the Cinquain variations listed here: Cinquain-Wikipedia These are acceptable methods to use. Please list the form you use so we can learn from you.

Etheree The Etheree poem consists of ten lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. The trick is to create a memorable message within the required format. Poets can get creative and write an Etheree with more than one verse, but the idea is to follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Reversed Etheree Syllable Count: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Double Etheree Syllable Count: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 

Senryu in English 5/7/5 syllable structure. A Senryu is written about love, a personal event, and have IRONY present. Click the link to learn the meaning of irony.

 

Source: Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 106, “Ghost & Hollow,” #SynonymsOnly | Colleen Chesebro ~ The Fairy Whisperer

12 thoughts on “Colleen Chesebro’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Synonyms Only – Hollow and Ghost

  1. Beautiful and poignant Tanka, Debby, but also true. I read and loved “Words We Carry” and one of the things I love about this book is that you can read from it whenever you need to and there’s always takeaway message.

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