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Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge – #Themeprompt – The Day After
I jumped into Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge with a Reversed Mirror Double Etheree. This week’s challenge is a #Themeprompt – The Day After.
The Day After
The beginning of the new world order.
Breathe in the glorious gift of life.
We remain distanced, gloved and masked.
Behold, our new world awaits.
Taking in the outdoors,
People emerging,
Unshackled gates.
Aftermath.
The day
Came.
The
New gifts
Presented.
Our creator
Replenished the world.
Rivers and streams run clear,
Black sooty air has vanished.
Take a glimpse and taste of the world.
Savor it and drink it in, listen.
Take heed, yesterday is gone – welcome home.
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©DGKaye2020
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D.G. Kaye is a nonfiction/memoir writer, who writes from her own life experiences and self-medicates with a daily dose of humor.
26 Comments
Toni Pike
How amazing you are, Debby – this is fantastic. Toni x
dgkaye
Wow, thanks so much Toni. I do like to jump in to these prompts when I’m inspired. Usually the story pops out to me, I draft the story then edit into poetry. <3
Jane Sturgeon
Debby, this is beautiful. <3
dgkaye
Thanks so much my Lovely <3
Vashti Quiroz-Vega
A beautiful and powerful poem, Debby! It’s amazing to see how the earth has flourished in our absence. I hope everyone has learned the lesson that we need nature, but it doesn’t need us.🥰
dgkaye
Absolutely my friend. We must keep reminding! <3
Robbie Cheadle
There has been some speculation about what these lock downs are all about, Debby. A new world order with less harmful industries may well be on the cards. A lovely poem.
dgkaye
Thank you Robbie, and thanks for your shares. We can only hope! <3
Jacqui Murray
That is so how I feel. I don’t think humans are meant to be locked away. We don’t do well with that.
dgkaye
Not usually, but lots of lessons to be learned from this. 🙂
Marian Beaman
What a hopeful poem. I just read your interview with Judith, and now find you here. WOW!
Thanks for this splendid etheree, Debby! I dabble in haiku, but you inspire me to do more. 🙂
dgkaye
Thanks so much Marian. You should hop on to some of Colleen’s fun weekly challenges 🙂
Natalie Ducey
Amazing piece, Debby. Amazing! xo
dgkaye
Thanks so much Natalie <3
lisa thomson
Deb, this is powerful and beautiful. Well done. Very inspiring. xx
dgkaye
Thanks Lis. <3
Colleen M. Chesebro
Sis, this is a lovely poem reminding us of the good things this virus has given us. I still think the mother goddess created this situation to make us sit up and take notice. Let’s all pray that we learn something from our plight. When we beat down the evil, we will have a fair chance. <3
dgkaye
Absolutely, so mote it be! 🙂 Yes, that’s the message, to take a look around and inside. <3
sally cronin
Fabulous Debby and so powerful… nature has certainly taken full advantage of our exclusion and I hope that it manages to hold on to some its reclamation as humans reenter the world.. ♥♥
dgkaye
The cards are in our hands Sal. Hopefully, the world will take heed. Thank you. <3 <3
Norah Colvin
This is wonderful, Debby. I do hope we can learn from this and make some of these beneficial changes permanent.
dgkaye
Amen to that Norah 🙂
John Maberry
Quite right for the times and true too.
dgkaye
No doubts! 🙂
Liesbet
Beautiful poem, Debby! It reminded me of a video I recently watched. If you haven’t seen it, I bet you’ll like it as well: https://youtu.be/OQadHRfum28
dgkaye
Wowwwwwwwwwwww, thank you for that amazing story! “The Great Realization: – We all preferred the world we found than the one we left behind.” <3