I’m hopping on to Suzanne Burke’s (Soooz) weekly Flash Fiction Challenge again. Come join in at Soooz’s blog– Welcome to the World of Suzanne Burke. The rules are simple, write whatever we choose in whatever form for the #Photoprompt Flash Challenge, not more than 750 words. I wrote in a Haibun poetic form.
“Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Image Prompt Week #7. Join in, have fun and let the creative muse loose. @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity
#Photoprompt
Casualties of a Silent War
Suspended in wait while idling in neutral, nothing is certain, nor will ever be the same. The Mother Goddess reveals the consequences of our decisions. A cruel awakening descends upon us, throwing us a glimpse, an acrid taste of what we’ve missed along the way – or perhaps, what we’ve forgotten.
In the bliss of ignorance, choosing not to hear the call, happy to remain invisible contributing to the noise, happy not attracting attention from the powers that be, a desperate attempt to dodge the path of ominous events to come.
I choose to stay in the now and the know, rather than gripping on to the unknown, writhing with fear, camouflaged under nature’s cover where I observe from.
She watches us, hidden and inconspicuous to the naked eye and the passerby. But the all-knowing sees all and straddles in wait for the world to respond.
Cruel Awakening
Mother Nature awaits us
To make the right move
©DGKaye2020
Original Post where you can join in: “Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Image Prompt Week #7. Join in, have fun and let the creative muse loose. @pursoot #IARTG #ASMSG #WritingCommunity – Welcome to the World of Suzanne Burke.
Having read that I will stay at home quivering and not venture outside.
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Oh my, sorry Danny, lol 🙂 x
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I loved that, Debby – so powerful. Toni x
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Oh thanks so much Toni 🙂 xx
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Fabulous piece my friend… great response to the prompt and speaks for many of us…♥♥
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Thanks so much Sal. Not difficult to read my mind, lol ❤ xx
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A person could read volumes into this tiny piece.
Stay safe under nature’s cover, Debby!
Oh, before I leave. Where do you get the cartoon avatars? They’re gorgeous.
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Thanks Kathy. I did feel with this piece that it has potential to become much more. ❤ Download 'Bitmoji' and create your avatar and use in blogs, emails or anywhere. Once you download, you will have an icon on your top bar. You can save images and use anywhere, also if you don't see an appropriate tagline for your subject, just type and the words will appear on the avatars! ❤
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Excellent, Sis. Add a haiku or tanka to this and you would have a haibun or tanka prose. LOL! It’s that simple. ❤
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Lol,I thought about that ❤
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Done! ❤
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This is a thought provoking piece, Debby. Well done.
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Thanks so much Robbie. I just added a Haiku/Haibun to go with it, at Colleen’s suggestion ❤
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Thank you so much, Debby! This is a powerful take on the image! I love the inclusion of the Haiku/Haibun. I’ll be featuring this on my site on either Friday or Saturday. I’m so delighted to have you take part again. ❤
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Thanks so much Soooz. I like to try and hop on a challenge weekly – good for the writing chops, lol. It’s also therapeutic. Happy to be part of. ❤
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So ominous, Debby. I love it when you take up these challenges and stretch. You’re so talented that it’s always a pleasure. 🙂
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Wow, thank you for that Diana. I’m definitely exercising my poetry chops while keeping in tone with the world. ❤
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Quietly menacing, Debby. I love to read flash fiction but I’m not very good at writing economically (as you well know), but we’ll see. Beautiful image. Great work. Thanks for the inspiration!
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Thanks so much Olga. Yes, this is definitely a different stle of writing, which is great exercise for the mind. Stay well! ❤
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The problem is, I believe what you’ve written! There are other dimensions of reality just as real as our own even though I can’t see them. Sigh. Well done.
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Thanks Jacqui. It is the reality and up to us all what we choose to do with it. 🙂
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What a powerful piece Deb, speaking volumes about nuances of Mother Nature. I love that image, it could take you anywhere!
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Thanks so much Balroop. That means a lot coming from a poetry guru ❤
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I want some of that stuff you have! Amazing what you got from that image!
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Wow! Thank you my friend. I always go with first impressions on these photoprompts, it’s easy to see what’s lurking in my head LOL 🙂
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Hmmmmm!
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What a gorgeous photo, Debby, and your haibun is perfectly fitting. Well done.
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Thanks so much Norah. I can’t take credit for Suzanne’s photo, but it is my Haibun ❤
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Well done!
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Thank you Mark 🙂
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I think it’s best not to know what Mother Nature has in store for us! Great response, Debby. I tried to share on Twitter, but the Internet over here on the Island is not too good and it won’t let me do it. x
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Thanks Stevie. Like I wrote, some choose to know and some don’t. And please, no apologies. ❤ Enjoy!!xx
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Shivering in agreement. Mother Nature is MAD (and has every right to be). I LOVE your piece here, and your Haibun and prose.
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Thank you Pam. ❤
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Yes! I agree. When are we going to learn. I love it, Debby! The haiku at the end is a brilliant touch. Bravo! 😀 xo
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Thanks so much Vashti. I know you ‘get it’ ❤ xx
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Nature is powerful. Nature rules. Nature deserves respect. Yet, we have to face it to discover earth’s hidden or not so hidden treasures. Great poem, Debby. 🙂
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Thanks Liesbet, and great analogy! 🙂 x
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